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Agent Wilson stared at the Senator’s body and then glanced at the fresh prick on his finger from zipping the hooker’s dress. Then he collapsed.
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Snoring ? lol! Our word count is definitely collapsing! I enjoyed your hint!
ReplyDeleteWow! That's brilliant. You crammed an entire murder mystery in 25 words.
ReplyDeleteOh my gosh, that was wonderful! I want to keep reading, except...it is absolutely brilliant on its own! Great job!
ReplyDeleteI sense a conspiracy! These hint pieces are such wonderful teases, kind of like prompts unto themselves.
ReplyDeleteWorks on its own and as an opening hook.
ReplyDeleteI like it!
I'd like to know what happens next.
ReplyDeleteNever thought about using this as a hook or an expanded story. The point of this exercise was to basically give a story in 25 words.
ReplyDeleteThat said. Thank you all so much for your kind words.
that's a win!
ReplyDeleteThe KGB had an umbrella gun for poisoning people, but you've done them one better with the stripper zipper gun :)
ReplyDeleteThis could lead a reader in a million directions! Great effort. JHUK
ReplyDeleteHow relevant, given all the scandals that cropped up a couple years back. Short (duh) and sweet, and well done.
ReplyDeleteHa! That was quick and dead! ;) Well done!
ReplyDeleteAre they truly dead? Was it a sleeping potion? Now I want to know more. A quick little mistery.
ReplyDeleteI suppose that's why they call this "hint fiction."
ReplyDeleteThanks again for the kind posts.
Great hint fiction Rob :)
ReplyDeleteLove it, good job :)
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